范文一
（综合商学院和中文所有同学的文章得出）
①It can be noticed that there are some unhealthy living habits among young people, especially college students. /②Nowadays, college students gradually develop/form some unhealthy habits. /③There are many bad living habits among college students. ①Typical examples/②The bad habits include/③前一句话后面用逗号, such as staying up late, being addicted to games, consuming in an inappropriate way, skipping breakfast, eating too much junk food and so on. ①There are three reasons for this./②The reasons for this are as follows．/③This is due to (results from) several factors. Firstly/First, students lack self-control, so they cannot regulate and control their life appropriately. Secondly/Second, various places of entertainment around campus have a negative effect on students' life and the order of teaching. Thirdly/Third, parents only pay much attention to children's exams and overlook the cultivation of their overall quality. Forthly/Forth, exam-oriented education lay emphasis on students' scores, and neglect the importance of character education and health education. Last but not least, they are too young to realize the importance of health. （原因选取两点就可以了，不用太多）In view of the seriousness of this issue, it is time that we took effective measures. Firstly, it is suggested that universities or colleges should cultivate students' awareness of healthy living. Secondly, students themselves are well-advised to learn to regulate and control their own life appropriately. Only by doing so can we hope to see the ideal scenes in which students enjoy their colorful and healthy life in Ivory Tower. （本次没要求写采取的措施，故可省略, 或稍微提一下，）(298 words)
范文二
（中文 任子萱）
As a university student, I know, there are many bad habits in our daily life. First, lots of students don't eat breakfast, because they get up so late. Although they do not have enough time to eat breakfast, they are not willing to go to bed early at night. Besides, they are addicted to surfing on the Internet, such as on-line games, chatting with others by QQ，etc. Even worse, many male students are attracted by smoking and drinking. Why do students have bad habits? Maybe they are too young to know about the importance of health and are really lazy. Maybe they lack self-control . It's not so difficult to have a good living habit, as long as you want. (117 words)